Monday, January 25, 2010

An Example of Narrative Text


Text organisation


Language features

Orientation

John slumped in the armchair, his arms crossed and his face with with a gloomy frown. He was a new kid in town, but no-one knew he was even there. John didn’t like anybody and they didn’t like him. All day he sat in the armchair, staring out the window.

who?


where?


mental process

action verb

Complication

Through the window he saw a gigantic hollow tree in vacant lot. The tree seemed to call him. He stood slowly up, then started to walk towards the tree. Its branches were very thin and its roots dug into the ground like claws. The tree had thorns all over it. John tried to turn away from the tree but he couldn’t. A mysterious force was pulling him into the hollow.



linking words



specific participants

Resolution

John never reappeared ... but no-one noticed or cared.


(Adapted from Derewianka, 1990)

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